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 proofreading exercise with feedback lesson 2 by Mr.Zaki

proofreading exercise with feedback lesson 2 by Mr.Zaki
proofreading exercise with feedback lesson 2 by Mr.Zaki



proofreading exercise with feedback lesson 2 by Mr.Zaki to help you improve your English and learn from other students' mistakes.Learn English by doing the exercise below.

Find the errors or mistakes within the following text:


I'm in danger because I bet a lot on a horse race, so I borrowed money from a gangster. their height is different to mine. they criticize because I didn't pay money. When I recognize that I spend too much money  but it is too late. While i was traveling by a carriage, the gangster saw me and then a leader make a signal mean chase me.i want a driver drive faster but he look like criticize that. he thought i was a prime so i have to explain that i'm having trouble and he said he is a  junior and this is the first time he invent.after all of it, i get enough money and pay  a debts for the gangster.


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suggested solution:

I am in danger because I bet a lot on a horse race, so I borrowed money from  gangsters. Their height is different from mine. They criticized me because I did not pay money. When I recognized that, I spent too much money, but it was too late. While I was traveling by a carriage, the gangsters saw me and then a leader made a signal to his team to chase me.I wanted a driver to drive faster but he looked as if he did not like that. He thought I was a prime so I had to explain that I had a trouble.He said, "he is a  junior." After all, I got enough money and paid  my debts for the gangsters.

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Mr.Zaki Badr
Mr.Zaki Badr
My name is Zaki Badr.I am an online English teacher. Contact me on WhatsApp: +201027871551 I have been teaching English  since 2011. English teaching certificates that I got : *TESOL Certificate, Arizona State University,USA, December 2018.

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