proofreading exercises with answers lesson 9| Learn English

 proofreading exercises with answers lesson 9| Learn English

proofreading exercises with answers lesson 9| Learn English
proofreading exercises with answers lesson 9| Learn English



Proofreading exercises with answers lesson 9 is about Vietnam. 

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Vietnam is an S-shaped strip of land, located in the center of Southeast Asia. Vietnam is my mother country where I was born and grew up. I love it so much because it has many special things below.

Firstly, VN is a country which has a long coastline. That is the reason why VN has many breathtaking views and natural landscapes, stretching through many provinces such as Ha Long, Binh Thuan, Hue… especially Ha Long bay at Van Don Province which is one of the most majestic locations which have a lot of the limestone mountain in the sea. The ships are bustling after the expedition. The most beautiful scene is when you stay on the ship deck and watch the horizon in the orange sky of the afternoon. it is really nice.

Secondly, VN has many historical monuments, recognized by Unesco as preserved monuments such as Thien Mu Pagoda .... After many years, some of them have been damaged but are restored by the restorer. Many pagodas have a lucky symbol that many visitors want to rub and touch their chin. They hope to be lucky, loyal, and successful in a year. but this situation is not good with it when the government sustains it. so the mayor must issue a decree prohibiting touching. Most ambitious people complained about this rule.

Thirdly, I have an enthusiast for food. There are the charming things that you must try such as banh mi, pho, bun bo….all of them are famous foods. you can find it on each corner street. you must look for a refuge where you enjoy them with all the senses…

In conclusion, Vn is a beautiful place and a brilliant destination for visitors which will be a bright spot for the country's smokeless industry.




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Corrected Version (concerning Grammar, not meaning: draft 1):

Vietnam is an S-shaped strip of land located in the center of Southeast Asia. It is my mother country where I was born and grew up. I love it so much because it has many unique things. First, it is a country that has a long coastline. It has many breathtaking views and natural landscapes, stretching through provinces like Ha Long, Binh Thuan, and Hue. Especially Ha Long Bay at Van Don Province, a superb location. It has a lot of limestone mountains in the sea. The ships are bustling after the expedition. The most beautiful scene is when you stay on the ship deck and watch the horizon in the orange sky in the afternoon. That is nice. Second, Vietnam has many historical monuments recognized by UNESCO as preserved monuments, such as Thien Mu Pagoda. . .After many years, some of them have been damaged but were restored. Many pagodas have a lucky symbol with which many visitors want to rub and touch their chin. They hope to be blessed, loyal, and thriving in a year. The mayor must issue a decree prohibiting touching the lucky symbol. Most ambitious people complained about this rule. Thirdly, I am enthusiastic about food. They are the fascinating things that you must try, such as Banh Mi, Pho, and Bun Bo. All of them are common foods. You can find them on each corner street. It would be best to look for a place where you enjoy them with the five senses. In conclusion, Vietnam is a beautiful place and a tourist attraction destination, a bright spot for the country.


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