proofreading services -- free samples 2021
|proofreading services -- free samples 2021|
sample short story before proofreading:
The same short story after proofreading:
A long time ago, there was a poor farmer. He had a daughter; she dreamed of becoming a doctor. Her family was too poor to rent a teacher for teaching her, so she failed the test. She was upset about that and she wanted to suicide. When she came back home, her father asked for the result, but she told a lie: it had not yet appeared. Her dad felt she was odd that day. Then, he went to the farm and kept planting grain and corn for the winter because it was close. When he finished his job, saw his daughter's diary on the table, and went back to his home. He was curious, so he opened it and looked at it. He saw a line of words: "sorry dad, I failed my test, so I had to leave to go somewhere unknown and I was shy." While he was reading his daughter's diary, he heard a big sound from the door of the house, a priest was knocking on the door, asking for some food. The father felt atrocious, and he wanted some advice from the monk. He said, "You should make some cartoons to entertain your daughter." But it did not work. He did not know what he should do and then he fell asleep. In his dream, he saw a fairy; he wished he could see his daughter again so he asked a fairy, and she agreed but she told him to sell his farm to meet his daughter then he agreed. The next day, a group of people came to his home and had a contract that he must sign. However, after all, they told him where his daughter was.
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