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 proofreading services -- free samples 2021

proofreading services -- free samples 2021
proofreading services -- free samples 2021

It is crucial when you want to deliver your message the best way. The higher position you have in a company, the more responsibility you need to have. Your words may be misunderstood if you don't use the correct grammar and punctuation. Therefore, we offer proofreading services to help you overcome this problem. Some are searching for programs to do proofreading online--but it doesn't work since programs aren't human. If you want to do proofreading, you need to be either an English teacher or a writer who has a lot of knowledge of the English language. Learn English at Learn Special English by Checking our free sample below:


sample short story before proofreading:


A long time ago, there is a poor farmer. He has a daughter and she dreams to become a doctor, but her family too poor to rent a teacher for teaching her so she faith the test.  She is upset about that and she wants to suicide, when so come back home the father asks for the result but she tells a lie that it does not appear yet but her dad feel she is odd today. Then, he still goes to the farm and keep planting grain and corn for the winter because it is close. When he finishes his job, he goes back to his home and sees his daughter's diary on the table. He was curious so he open and look at it. He saw a line of word: sorry dad, I was faith my test so I was leave to go to somewhere unknown and I am shy. While he was reading his daughter's diary, he heard a big sound from the door of the house, a priest is knocking the door and he ask for some food. The dad feel atrocious, and he wanted some advice from the monk and he said you should make some cartoons to find his daughter, but it did not work. He does not know what should he do and then, he fell as asleep . In his dream, he saw a fairy and he wish he can see his daughter again so a fairy agrees but he must pay his farm to meet his daughter and then he agrees. In the next day, a group of people comes to his home and have a contract, he must  sign. However, after at all them tell him a place of her daughter that is on his calling..


The same short story after proofreading:


Corrected version

A long time ago, there was a poor farmer. He had a daughter; she dreamed of becoming a doctor. Her family was too poor to rent a teacher for teaching her, so she failed the test.  She was upset about that and she wanted to suicide. When she came back home, her father asked for the result, but she told a lie:  it had not yet appeared. Her dad felt she was odd that day. Then, he went to the farm and kept planting grain and corn for the winter because it was close. When he finished his job, saw his daughter's diary on the table, and went back to his home. He was curious, so he opened it and looked at it. He saw a line of words: "sorry dad, I failed my test, so I had to leave to go somewhere unknown and I was shy." While he was reading his daughter's diary, he heard a big sound from the door of the house, a priest was knocking on the door, asking for some food. The father felt atrocious, and he wanted some advice from the monk. He said, "You should make some cartoons  to entertain your daughter." But it did not work. He did not know what he should do and then he fell asleep. In his dream, he saw a fairy; he wished he could see his daughter again so he asked a fairy, and she agreed but she told him to sell his farm to meet his daughter then he agreed. The next day, a group of people came to his home and had a contract that he must sign. However, after all, they told him where his daughter was.



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Mr.Zaki Badr
Mr.Zaki Badr
My name is Zaki Badr.I am an online English teacher. Contact me on WhatsApp: +201027871551 I have been teaching English  since 2011. English teaching certificates that I got : *TESOL Certificate, Arizona State University,USA, December 2018.

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