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proofreading exercises with feedback lesson 1 by Mr.Zaki | learn English

 proofreading exercises with feedback lesson 1 by Mr.Zaki

proofreading exercises with feedback lesson 1 by Mr.Zaki
proofreading exercises with feedback lesson 1 by Mr.Zaki



Find the mistakes in the following paragraph, and correct them to learn English :

We also need help when we are in danger or in a bad situation. We may ask for help from the older people like when you need a phone to call your parents to take you home or find help from the police if you are followed by someone unknown,and you feel not safe and doubt that person. We always ask the teacher when we have a question, not to have a bad grade in the exam or test,but to learn from him.Ask at a time you don’t know the answer or when you recognize that the class is about to be over.


Corrected Version 

We also need help when we are in danger or in a bad situation. We may ask for help from older people like when you need a phone to call your parents to take you home or find help from the police if you are followed by someone unknown, and you feel not safe and doubt that person. We always ask the teacher when we have a question, not to have a bad grade in the exam or test, but to learn from him. Ask at a time you don’t know the answer or when you recognize that the class is about to be over.



Feedback:

We use  ‘ ,and ‘ to link two or more independent clauses

Independent clause = sentence = meaning is complete 

For example: When I go to school,..........  dependent clause


When I go to school, I take my lessons.   Independent clause (A sentence)


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Mr.Zaki Badr
Mr.Zaki Badr
My name is Zaki Badr.I am an online English teacher. Contact me on WhatsApp: +201027871551 I have been teaching English  since 2011. English teaching certificates that I got : *TESOL Certificate, Arizona State University,USA, December 2018.

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